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Date: 2011-12-30 08:55 pm (UTC)>>“From what I've heard there are no female mages not because it's believed that learning magic will make them infertile. <<
Delete "not" above.
>>“What if the rumour is true?”<<
Tch. Why don't we find out whether the rumour is true by investigating whether any female mages have borne children and how their birth rate compares to those of non-mage women? And while we're at it, let's compare fatherhood rates for the males.
>>“How would I be able to tell for sure?”
“There is no way. You're just going to have to play her and see what happens.”<<
This sounds like a major non sequitur. I thought they were still talking about poison on the knife. If they're back to talking about her role in their plans, that needs to be specified.